All Comments on 'Maverick Cattle Company Ch. 04'

This story is about all that keeps me coming back to Lit these days. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Great new chapter.

Glad to see Josh made sure Tony had on a condom,that sneaky bastard was trouble from the start, better that he is gone now,lol

Love all the action between Darrin and MItch, Keep it coming !!

Btw-There was a typo on page 3, when Darrin and mitch were in the hotel tub, you put Josh's name instead of Darrin at one point, no biggie

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This story gets better and better. Glad Tony is gone, he didn't deserve Josh. I hope he finds someone who will fall in love with him and treat him the way he should be. And I love the way Mitch is so protective of Josh, especially considering how Darrin had to talk him into taking the boy in.

Ah, yes, sweet revenge. I like that Tony got his and like even better that Josh had nothing to do with it. I look forward to the prom and to see Josh find someone worthy of him. Seems to be Darrin and Mitch make great parents and I see a lifetime of foster parenting ahead of them.

I love this story. I've read your story with Mitch & Darrin all the way through and when I saw this chapter was up, I was all like woohoo! I love these guys and I'm so glad that Tony got what he deserved. Revenge is sweet, especially when you don't have to do anything for it. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

So true Karma is a b.... lol but brilliant chapter as always love these guys

A big rainbow smile for stressing the condom use issue. Josh's character is a really good addition to the series. More?

i love this story,, check every day to see when a new posting...Each of us has to go through many people in our lifes ti;; we find the right one. No one is perfect but Tony was a slug Gald he got his due and Josh didnt have anything to do with it.

your writing is great..Just cant wait till the next chapterplease dont leave us hanging, your characters and story is supreb we all can relate to each character. please continue to write

You know how to write a good story. I whish I had figured out I was Bi sooer than 10 months ago. Then mabey high school could have been different, better even.

i enjoyed this. i didnt notice you had added more to the series.? but have enjoyed reading it tonight.? better than the olympic crap on the box.?

fantastic

i cant fault this story in any way.? 10 stars

Again, a real talent. Can't wait to see what happens in the future!