All Comments on 'Max and Me'

A 750 word story is good way to kick off a writing hobby and you did well. Fun and sexy.

Very good first story. Perhaps too many exclamation points, but that may be a personal bias on my part. Keep up the good work.

Yep, liked it. Lots of nice touches (no pun intended) and amusing too. And utterly bereft of any overbearing worthyness. Just simple, straightforward sexy fun. Great. Prepare to be copied.