All Comments on 'Max Burnage Ep. 01: Cheaters Beware'

Another winner!

5

ok time to bring ryan in---------------- smiling

another hit. thank you for posting it

I could read lots more of this. I don’t usually read series stories, but will check out those mentioned. Keep up the great writing!

Munchie184

As always great work and I enjoyed it . I always look for your stories and get lost in time reading them. Kudos to a job well done.

That's all I gotta say!

5-stars!

-JMFC

One of your best!

Great story line. Looking forward to the series.

Another good one from you. I like the Sci fantasy element and the bad guys get theirs again. 5 stars.

Looking forward to more stories with Max!

Just seeing your name on a story lets me know i am in for yet another great adventure. Even though the plots are similar there are new twists to be relished. As always i look forward to your next one

Put to sleep by a man with pointed ears on the TV! AH SPOCK! I liked that. Good touch.

Saddletramp brings us another new character in the pursuit of truth, justice and the American way. Five stars

Agree with jtukee - You've always been one of my "go to" authors on this site but the past 6 months have been some of your best work. One minor technical edit - you can't smoke in a bar in airport terminals. You're driving but would be neat if Arestia has Max's child... Thanks for everything you do! 5+*

Don’t listen to the WACC’s and keep going on

One great story after another, again and again. Did you sell your soul to the devil?

Another great one! Fun fantasy read. Five stars!!! I can’t wait to read more in the Max Burnage series.

I can't wait for next one

Another enjoyable ride through your universe. Thanks

Outstanding as usual. Always look forward to reading your stories.

rock on soldier!! you never cease to amaze me. As I have told you before, the story is what grabs my attention and you have woven several into this one with smooth tale. Thank you sir.

One question I would like answered, maybe in one of your future stories possibly.

Why did Adrestia choose Max. I wonder if it is because he is the protégé of some Greek god or someone Adrestia knew when she was younger. Someone Adrestia loved millennia ago but lost.

Just wondering like.

Like many of your tales, they may not be the best written, the smoothest prose, or the greatest characters, but damn are they fun to read!

Thx!

Thank you for another great read. I never pass by one of your stories.

You capture reader from the start. Then you take us on an adventure and it is fun. I love how you incorporate characters from previous stories.

Thank you sir!

Looking forward to more of the series. I love the way you cross characters over from different stories.

...on the ST express, thanks for the entertainment. Always good going and liked the familiar characters.

You have become my favorite writer on the site. Looking forward to more stories.

Simply another great ride. I bow to your literary prowess. May Max have many fruitful and happy years with the goddess nemesis. Very well written, I look forward to more.

ST I just love your fantasy series, they always entertain and take my mind away from all the vile crap going on in the world and especially in the good ole USA. Thanks for another great tale of justice which is needed very badly in our country. I just wish it wasn't just fantasy but the real world. I was raised in a different era than nowadays, born in 1947. There just doesn't seem to be any moral ground anymore. Sad, very sad. So kudos to you and your tales, they always lift my spirit.

Good story, though the ending seemed a little rushed and the deus ex machine of “the voice” took any and all suspense out of it. I was hoping Dr. A would come in to smite the evildoers herself. Still a 5 though.

Nice beginning of the series. Looking forward to more adventures for Max! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I love these types of stories.

A big well done by Me

5 stars☆☆☆☆☆

I have to comment as anonymous because I do not have the computer skills to log in as old salty dog . You have a rare gift to be able to get your readers to feel like they are actually in the story they are reading. I love your universe and the things that take place in it. The only fault I find in your stories is they come to an end and I am never ready for that. keep up the good work. By the way is Eli. played by Sam Elliot? He is in MY universe. LOL

You know it’s going to be a good day when I see you have a new story posted!

Your start and build up is like no other.

Reading your stories is always an adventure, and you finish great.

5

Really great story telling and writing. I always love to read your work 5 stars all the way.

I would see the Burnage series on a rack between Remo Williams Destroyer and Mack Bolan Executioner.

..so we can stop with all the bitter divorced male revenge fantasies you old fuckers are obsessed with.

I don't know how you do it, but this is another winner. Your writing is a stroke of genius. Wonderful, as always...

If I haven’t said it enough you are one hell of a fantastic person. I just can’t get enough of these fantastic stories. These are the types of stories that should be written in the loving wife category instead of these written by newbies who keep thinking that being a cuckold is a good thing. Every time I see a cuckold story 95% of the time it’s written by a newbie and they always look like they took 2 minutes to write. Your stories saddletramp1956 are stories that make the loving wife category worth reading these are stories that make the loving wife category great. It just aggravates me when a newbie writer thinks that cuckolding/swinging/cheating/sharing are the only things to write about . Then to top it all off they either put the garbage in the wrong category or try to make the garbage look like every one should be either a cuckold or swinging or cheating or sharing. To me if they want to write garbage like that then give them there own category and leave the loving wife category alone to the proper writers like yourself and others. Yes I’m sorry I’m going on but I was getting fed up with the crap that was ruining the loving wife category. Just wish this site would just give them there own category so they can jerk off to there cuckold/cheating/swinging/sharing stories.

I really enjoyed that.

I'm looking forward to the next one.

Awesome read!

Saddletramp1956 has an attractive & winning formula. (Pssst, 'Jake' is one of the bad guys.) The few typos are not a distraction. Thank you, again, for a fun read.

This is a rambling, discursive, mish-mash of a story. Edit, man, edit! Too much extraneous filler.

you both use old Gods in your tales making the tales much clearer. TK U MLJ LV NV

this premise should give the author several more good stories. TK U MLJ LV NV

There is not much emotion to these stories, other than hate and violence. Who cares if the sociopathic cunt wives are said to suffer. They are basically caricatures, like paper cutouts.

It's like reading a comic book for the depth of emotion here.

Great to see all the good guys working together. What will happen when the bad ones get to look in?

Keep going with the BTB, may I tentatively suggest a bastard or two get roasted along the way? They do exist.

Over self entitled arrogant perps beware

"They tried to kill him, Eli." - But they dropped him at a hospital?

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"I'm still a married man." - So what? His wife cheated on him, drugged him, made him watch her fucking another man, helped beat him nearly to death, I think that fidelity is the least of his concerns.

As for "two wrongs don't make a right," that might hold true if it as a revenge affair, but this would have been different, IMHO.

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The sex in the dream was "very real?" What happened to he's a married man?

/

How did Shannon and Jake know when he was coming home?

Another great story! Loved the expansion on the background mythology of Adrestia. Always enjoy your stories and look forward to you new entries. Thanks for the read.

Great start to a series!

Although I'm never a great fan of stories where the bitch doesn't show ANY remorse or regret at all.

One mistake in the whole story, So mush for preliminaries

much^

Love the story and like the New Character. it would be interesting to read more of the Burnage Agency exploits.

Interesting way that you brought together three of your story lines!

Another great Saddletramp tale, I look forward to the next one.

Scores 5/5

Your imagination is mind boggling. I don't know how you come up with all these stories and.manage to make them interesting every damn time. My only complaint is their length. We get eight or ten page cuck stories, but yours only run six pages. Another great escape, can't wait for the next one. Oh yeah, where can I get some of Adrestia's tea?

I do question the ongong emphasis on "smoking". After the worldwide awareness that smoking a bad for the heath of smokers and those around them (I did notice that Max stepped away from non-smokers to smoke with others), it is odd that a fantasy of good over evil would include the hero smoking. I must have missed something. "Magic" smoking? I do think the story was very well done and a good read -- I recently discovered your stories and am working through them. Thank you very much.

Best regards, A fan in Michigan that cannot get his membership straightened out.

Another Ssddletramp hit.

THANK YOU FOR AN EXCELLENT STORY! 10 STARS!

It was very different, but I liked it very much.

Comic book stuff.

Why would the detective ask him about what happened with his wife and the attorney? They were in police custody so what would he know?

Also, why was the cheating whore getting the bills paid and a stipend? That made no sense. Other than that, good btb porn.

A great story by a great author

Great story...a really good read!!! Looking forward to starting on Ep. 2 next!!!

A great fantasy well written. A "bit" over the top but that's the reason I come here. If I wanted reality I might visit Shakespeer or Sam Clemens!

5 stars Hell if I know why but I enjoyed it so why not!

Cheers

SAGE

Best sex of his life, with a GODDESS Who worships you???!!! Duh!!!

Agree with other comment.

Fiction good

Reality suspended

jtwheels

well written story with an excellent outcome.

excellent writing, great story flowed well. definite 5

very well written definite 5

I really like how you connect your stories together, I remember the BTB camp being mentioned in another story

finally a writer who knows how to tell a story. he also knows how to complete his story.

well written story definitely rated 5.

i really enjoy your world and enjoyed all your stories. Keep up the writing.

I love the tie-ins with your other stories. If I could I would rate 10 out of 5.

Thrilling and a good read.

Great read! You are a master storyteller!

VERY GOOD STORY WELL WRITEN AND FOLOWED THE CONFINES OF YOUR UNIVERSE Please continue to write I have read all your stories and rate them all as 5

If you are going to write a fantasy story, please label it a fantasy! This is a fantasy!

Hmmmmmmmmm. Fantasy, the bedrock of fictional literature. Alternate realities, alternate legalities, and so many more alternatives :)

Great reads, thank you.

EXCELLENT. The complete statement is... "You have been served VENGEANCE." Never let a betrayer go unpunished.

I’m sure you’ve used part of this in another story. The paragraph in which the man in uniform addresses the group for the first time is very familiar. Same wording as I’ve read before.

yout univerwse is an edxcrwiirwnt place to rweadx about abdx rwouldx be fantastic to live in,

Great opener for a new series. Wondering why i only see 2 new ones.

ST is of course free to "create his own universe", but when the universe is such that any time the protagonist gets into trouble the author can just create a super power to get him out of it takes away the thrill of crisis. Less interesting than if he protagonist had to actually come up with something clever.

I love the idea of an avenging angel, great concept,

simply awesome! Thanks

Just sad that max vibes up my crush adrestia

Great good over evil saga. Can't wait to read further adventures of Max and Adrestia. Well done 5++ stars

5 Stars Saddle Tramp . I think this is my favorite of this series . Keep up the Great work and I wish I knew a Lady like DR A. Only My Lady would have dark hair and Doe Brown eyes .

Well done. Easy to read and fantasize to. Couple of editig error, nothing big. Keep writing.

XYZ

Awesome again ST!!!!

Another great story from Saddletramp1956. Slightly ironic that Anonymous complains about editing errors, but describes them as ‘editig error’.

Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Nother Saddletramp homer…! Clear outta da park!

5 stars

I think this might be Saddletramps Best work . 5 Stars for a great read

I just love it. You are one my 10 favourite authors on Literotica. Keep going, please!

The first few hours of Max’s experience at Camp Rollins was straight from USMC boot camp, at least what it was like in the late 1960’s. From the screaming, cursing drill instructors to the yellow footprints, to Max’s thought of ‘What the hell have I gotten myself into?’. I’ve asked over a dozen Marines what their first thought of boot camp was when they got off ‘the bus’ and they all said the same thing: “What the F*** have I got myself into!?”.

Great story, ‘Tramp. Thanks for the memories.

I think? 5 stars.

usual top story 5*****

Another excellent story by SaddleTramp! And another 5 BIG ASS STARS!