All Comments on 'May I Come In?'

How did you know I love vampires! Great holiday story plus sex! Actually you have a standing invitation to do do any taste testing in my home. Chrissy

Those grunts and growls sent me into orbit! 🥵

And that "dont get up, you just stay there and think about what just happened to you." OMG!

I hope we get more visits from The Alchemist outside of Halloween! 👉👈

Grunts, growls and your laugh... It has it all and it does it for me. That and the fact this time a Vampire?! Hot and bothered now and it is all your fault 😉

oh boy. where to begin.

first of all, it would have been really great timing if a vampire DID show up at my house on halloween, because my costume this year was, in fact, a vampire. so if all my fuckin vampire books didn't give it away right off the bat (heh), then the costume most definitely would have.

i'm afraid i would have fully ruined your speech though. as soon as you told me you're a vampire i would have only had 2 questions: "Are you really?" and "Are you going to KILL me or just bite me?" and upon receiving the "yes" and the "you'll just have to take that risk" i would already be letting you in.

(and then after you left i would be making preparations for the next time you showed up. now there's garlic and crosses on all the windows and i got some extra to stick on the front door after you're inside. if you're gonna use me for blood i might as well use u for something too i think.)

((also i am trying Very hard not to read into how much i enjoyed you threatening to break me. hope that doesn't awaken anything in me etc etc))

Mmmm yes yes yes daddy!!! This was perfect!!

I love your voice, you can have me 🤤

At the end, when you said, "I'll know where to find you if I get hungry again.", there was this tiny moment of anticipation of what you're going to say next, and in my head, I almost imagined it as you just standing in the doorway on your way out, back facing me, and you just look back at me with a smoldering smirk on your face and say, "And I may come in again 😉", how only you can say it (and I'm sure you WILL know how to say it) and *baam* the door closes and you're out. And I couldn't help but think that that would've been such a full circle moment for this piece!!!!

That being said, loved this piece!!! Your voice is amazing (as are you 😉)!!

~ S

i melted when you kept repeating “I want more” 😍 Love the premise of this! 👏

Tear my femoral artery rip it out of my thigh, you gorgeous monster! The listener is so nice. If a vampire laid his cards out so plainly like you did, i would have left him out there until the sun threatened to rise. I'd want to see how far i could push his human suit. Would I pay for this? Maybe, but i'm def that jerk that ups the ante with a shit hand. But what we got was a very exciting audio that sent chills up my spine in fear and anticipation. Makes me wonder who would win out in the end, A fear junky daring you to drain her like a juice box, or the gourmet trying to maintain control for as long as this blip in his eternal life will allow?