All Comments on 'May to December Ch. 04'

Lovely story......Thank you !!

Fantastic, believable characterization and brilliantly paced. Proof that December doesn't have to be a cold, dark, frigid month. Ever.

A really well-crafted story; which in itself isn't surprising given the quality of your other submissions. Not only well written and highly erotic, the story possesses a rare attribute - a believable story line. I have to admit your story really turned me on. I look forward to your next submission. Keep up the good work, Dawn.

Once again you have outdone yourself with this excellent submission.As always keep up the great writing . J.

you surpassed expectations with this!

A lovely ending that only promises a lot of well-deserved joy to both of them!