All Comments on 'Me and My Gods Pt. 02 - Mike My Hubby'

I'm not going to rate this because I can tell English is not your first language. However if you have an editor rewrite the story correcting all of your mistakes it might become a four star story. You should remove the story and resubmit it after extensive editing.

Ignore the person telling you to get an editor. They are an idiot.

You don't need an editor. You need an education.

I don't believe you have any other languages besides English. You're just illiterate. Go build a house without using any tools. That would turn out as well as the vomit you put on this website.