by annestoiletwater
Yeah..when the narrator uses 'I' that's first person, not second person.
Nicely done, the story just oozes helplessness.
That was a STORY? AYSM? Are You Shitting Me? I remember in 3rd grade reading one as this. Never since, until today. Now you have spoiled a perfect history lesson (life lesson, really). Thanks a friggng lot !!!
A creative way to tell a bigger story
...that was more like a bad poem. Thumb’s down.