All Comments on 'Meet Me in St. Louis Ch. 03'

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AliceGeeAliceGee11 months ago

So pleased that you have finally decided to resume this fascinating tale. I confess that I was disapointed when a new installment failed to materialize but all is forgiven now and the plot certainly has thickened.

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you Alice. I had a long period where I could not write for health reasons - but I am back now xxxxx

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulster11 months ago

Pixie, I love the mind and path which Lady Cynthia and Petra are headed, so beautiful and potentially deviant. I love it.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

used2bjustjused2bjustj11 months ago

As AliceGee mentioned, I too am glad to see you back on this wonderful tale. As most of your stories, it is a great read just for the storyline. The way you weave old England and it's Victorian ways as well as the American side is brilliant. And now we have a new thread of double dealing coming into the story that I'm sure will improve the read going forward.

5/5

J

MigbirdMigbird11 months ago

You are back, indeed. So enjoy this adventure and MCs — very nice mix of suspense, wit/humor and of course outrageously sensual sex; the latter so revealing of both women just as it should be in well crafted erotic fiction. Love this storyline.

SerradaCSerradaC11 months ago

In awe, I sit at the feet of the mistress and try to keep my hands in view at all times. Wonderful new chapter, Pixie, very exciting. I can't wait to see where it goes. Yours always, xxxx Oh and 5 stars.

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much, J, and yes, time to build up a head of steam on this and get to the action in St Louis - glad you are enjoying it xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you such much, Migbird, out of the confessional and back to the stories now :) xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much MamaS - I hope people will read your wonderful chapters on Diana in the making, too xxxxx

HottieOlwenHottieOlwen11 months ago

It has been so long since chapter 2, but this much is obvious:

1. The wait was worthwhile

2.. You certainly haven't lost your ability to write a very erotic story.

Welcome back, Pixie. It is so good to have you back restored to rude health, and in your case, I am happy to say, the ruder the better. 5 stars for this outstanding resumption of a very entertaining tale.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

To those who haven’t read SerradaC’s companion piece to this story: you are doing yourselves a great disservice, and neglecting a very talented writer in her own right. I know I wouldn’t have enjoyed SerradaC’s “Diana in the offing” series of chapters quite as much without reading Pixiehoff’s introductory chapters of “Meet me in St. Louis” and SerradaC’s contributions added to my appreciation of Pixiehoff’s original work.

That said; I really like how this continuations is developing. The exploration of a “new world” (in EVERY ways) is always an exciting experience. The added subterfuge of “Franklin” ruthlessly conniving to swindle our heroines (or worse) has me filled with trepidation. (Though “Artemis” IS a pretty formidable goddess.) *wink*.

I am obvious waiting in rabid anticipation for the next chapter of the epic collaboration to drop. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much Olwen, it is nice be back properly - the last five months have been difficult - but I was anxious to move this on xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much, Anonymous, and I echo that - I would urge all readers to look at Serrada's backstory to this. As ever, she writes hot, erotic fiction,

I am glad you are enjoying this xxxxx

chloe_switchchloe_switch11 months ago

Loving this series, Pixie dear!

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you, darling Chloe xxxxx

Qwer12Qwer1211 months ago

One of the best parts of all your stories is the little nuggets of overlap between. I love the two words in this one of “escorts” and “Emily”. Love the little play with words and crossovers. Another great one with the hints of drama and smut to come. Watching for the hidden Easter eggs is part of your charming style of writing. Top shelf sexual entertainment. Always 5 Star pleasure. Cheers.

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much, Qwer, I look forward to your comments - always so acute and observant xxxxx

Paul4playPaul4play11 months ago

Happy to see this story resumed in all its lusty glory, with building excitement about the future!

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much, Paul xxxxx

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy11 months ago

Greed power money, all the same in the past and will be in the future ….. but the Lady is smart and underestimated ….. so she can plan her game and play it well …. Now her lover is fallen for burke, she may have to settle in St. Louis to find the soulmate …… yes the plot tightening ….. great tale Madame

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨💋

PixiehoffPixiehoff11 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much, Franziska - and yes, the future is open for Lady Cynthia xxxxx

Cindy1001Cindy100110 months ago

Wonderful tale, again. I so enjoyed reading it!

PixiehoffPixiehoff10 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much Cindy xxxxx

Nicole2023Nicole202310 months ago

Whoooo so who is the other client

So pet and Burks. So will that leave sin and art? Ummm

PixiehoffPixiehoff10 months agoAuthor

You will have to wait and see, 2 x xxxxx

Nicole2023Nicole202310 months ago

Is it a sin to read this on church? Ummm where have I seen this...Emily's Escorts???

PixiehoffPixiehoff10 months agoAuthor

It could be - and yes, you may well have seen it in LitChat xxxx

Nicole2023Nicole202310 months ago

Yes I have visited a few times hehe

PixiehoffPixiehoff10 months agoAuthor

Hope to see you there soon x

amadeuseroticamadeuserotic10 months ago

Catching up with the connections ...

Serrada's story and Emily's escorts of course.

Darling Pixie, it is exciting to watch how masterfully you create strong connections and at the same time foil the plots of the greedy patriarchy. Making people feel guilty about their pleasures had always been useful for turning a tidy profit on said pleasures, whether it was prohibition or prostitution.

PixiehoffPixiehoff10 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much darling Wolfie - my pleasure is always enhanced by your comments xxxxx

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