All Comments on 'Meet The Neighbours'

A close neighbourhood. Sex a bit robotic 3*

I only gave you a 2 because you were too lazy to use characters to enact the story. Whenever I see the words I and you used as characters I stop reading the story. I as your reader resent being used to act out your story. If you are going to write, at

least take a little time to try learning something about the craft.

@luvpsy In response, it's completely fine that you don't like the style of the story, but I'm slightly miffed that you describe it as laziness. It was a deliberate decision - I often get taken out of the moment by the caricatures (as opposed to characters) in stories I read on this site and wanted to write something where the reader could fill in some gaps themselves and make the story more personal. Maybe be it didn't work as intended, but that doesn't make it lazy to have tried.

I loved it.

You talk about caricatures, and you call this cartoon a LW stories. All the characters are caricatures of people doing stupid things. You aren't necessarily lazy, you're just hapless.