by DoubleAA
Super first story DAA. There were a few minor typos/grammatical mishaps, which a thorough proof read would remove, that annoyed me slightly, but thought the development of the meeting and sex between the older Miss Corell and the ex-student Michael, was excellent. Please keep writing
Pretty good for your first story, read it backwards to proof read it…. Or better send to another writer to give a look over…. Will be waiting for the next go.
Maybe she'll forget the pill and be a mommy later in life, to a loving husband, while feeding her family with D CUS!
Loved every single word of it; write the sequel soon; another woman ?
Good fun but the details need work. Linda is 45 yet 26 years older than an ex student (a senior) who is buying booze? I don’t know of any 19 year old traffic controllers :-)