All Comments on 'Meeting an old student'

by DoubleAA

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Rainyday493Rainyday493about 1 month ago

Enjoyable story, hot, well described. Keep writing!

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 1 month ago

Very fun read. Please keep going.

Red_22bRed_22babout 1 month ago

Far too hot to be a one-off

Wiz1002Wiz1002about 1 month ago

Super first story DAA. There were a few minor typos/grammatical mishaps, which a thorough proof read would remove, that annoyed me slightly, but thought the development of the meeting and sex between the older Miss Corell and the ex-student Michael, was excellent. Please keep writing

sailorman1962sailorman1962about 1 month ago

Pretty good for your first story, read it backwards to proof read it…. Or better send to another writer to give a look over…. Will be waiting for the next go.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Maybe she'll forget the pill and be a mommy later in life, to a loving husband, while feeding her family with D CUS!

TomNJaxTomNJaxabout 1 month ago

Very nice story....seems a good start to more. Thanks for sharing

martiuscassius58martiuscassius58about 1 month ago

Loved every single word of it; write the sequel soon; another woman ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Waiting for the next Michael and Linda adventure!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Keep this story going.

Maybe Linda "forgets" Plan B and ends up pregnant

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Good fun but the details need work. Linda is 45 yet 26 years older than an ex student (a senior) who is buying booze? I don’t know of any 19 year old traffic controllers :-)

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