All Comments on 'Meeting Gran'

by Harvey_32

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A good start

I liked the start, but might suggest drawing out the interaction between the characters. Let the people build up some and be more descriptive of what is happening. Thanks for your time and imagination and looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
hurried

uh...what?

Harvey_32Harvey_32over 3 years agoAuthor
Who is Thomas???

John Thomas!

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