All Comments on 'Meeting Liz and Jen Ch. 01'

by Welby

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
very promising beginning

well set up - exciting characters - I'm looking forward to much more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Can I have chapter 2 please?

Nice build up, but can I have chapter 2 now, really enjoyed your style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice scene setting

Can't wait for chapter 2, nice work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very nice, looking forward to the next chapter

Great start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hmmm

What twenty year old talks like that, with so few contractions? Rating it three as that took away from any sense of natural setting.

liz33ndliz33ndover 7 years ago
great buildup

this is very interesting and quite erotic, I am excited to see how you continue.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous