All Comments on 'Meeting Mr Carlisle'

***So many similar writing styles in literotica now it's had to rate. Thanks for sharing.

Perfection!

Nice start for your first story.

Nice story - really hope we get to see part 2!

Nice story. I love Asian pussy-- taste and tightness. Have her fuck the vet or a man that brings his dog to the vet in part II

very hot.....

Was this your 1st time to be with a man?

A fantastic 1st story ..I'm a fan straight away ..well edited I believe & a good little afterthought at the end .. read !st thing this a.m, so put me in a nice place ,especially as I'm an older neighbour and there's no surf today due to flooding here on east coast of Oz. thankyou for the time you would have put into that .

Loved reading it. I hope you will write more.

very nice story. looking forward to reading some more.

Good until the "daddy" bs

Yummy! Lovvved it, but then I'm a dirty old man.

To all us dirty old men that love Asian dolls, very well done. Only thing, no Asian parents sleep in, they should have left for work earlier. Hope this is just the first chapter.

Wow, nice job! Please have a sequel!