All Comments on 'Meeting the Cute Woman'

Sorry Joe, most unlikely supermarket meeting!

Thanks for another 5 star +++ adventure.

To the anonymous commenter. Thank you for your critique.

Don't see Anonymous's problem. I've done this plenty of times, I'm not in hurry and other people probably are. The unlikely part is is the conversation afterwards. Having gone in front the person with only 2 or 3 items just grabs them and runs

Sometimes people just meet ... just enjoy each other ... just not earth shattering ... just enjoying life.

I like it, could keep it going..

You certainly have a way with words and images. I should have like to see the story drawn out a bit longer, which would add to the titillation value.

I liked the story but To me if feels that it ended to abruptly to make it worth a 5 so I won't wote since it is far better than four.

For your next one make it complete please. ;-)

Even elderly people could have a full fledge love story.

Enjoyable story!

5

*****Damn that was HOT!! I am going shopping tomorrow. Thanks for the very entertaining read.

Enjoy your stuff…

This is a good old folk's tale that is inspiring but needs a better ending. Thanks

To Russ43Chandler. Since you do not allow any contact, I'll have to answer your concern here, First off thanks for commenting, and second I tend to write 'day in the life' type of stories; there is no traditional ending where all questions are answered and the characters ride off into the sunset. This allows me to write a part 2 if there is enough interest.

Made a good change for the older,s to be portrayed as real people who want and do enjoy sex, lonely shy but still real alive people.

Good one.