by JonahDeMarck
@anonymous…all of you…why are you reading stories in the Loving Wives category if you don’t like that? Maybe you should stick to Erotic Couplings.
you fucked it up when you went into the female from the male. . didnt know what you were doing totally fantaSY SHIT at least make some truthworthy
Thank you for your comments, positive and otherwise! I’d like to respond to them, as I enjoy the discourse. Whackdoodle, this is a link that Beth and Jack agreed on, they talked it through thoroughly and it is a step further in an already healthy and functioning threesome lifestyle they’ve worked out. It sounds like you had a bad experience in this realm, and if so, I’m sorry for your hurt. As far as the exhibitionism goes, it’s risky and that’s the thrill. 26thNC, ‘bull’ is a term in this kink, especially when a ‘dom’ male third is being labeled. Perhaps you don’t like the term, and maybe it’s being phased out, I’m not sure about that, but it is certainly a viable label in this kink, so get over it! Luvs2watchher1, I knew it was a gamble to do that and I worried it was clunky. Thanks for your feedback. I just really wanted to give Beth’s firsthand thoughts prominence as well as Jack’s. I did that differently in part two and I hope I did it better. I hope you check it out and let me know. FYI, this is not ‘fantasy shot’, it’s an amalgamation of real experiences, so I will work harder to make it more ‘truthworthy’. Part 2 should drop in the next 2days, so those that liked the first, I think part 2 is hotter!! I’ve got a plan for part three, so if I get positive feedback I’ll get that written soon. Otherwise it’s on to something new. Thanks again for the comments and the support!! -Jonah
Nice. Very nice. Please keep going. Looking forward to more...and I see there's a 2 and 3, so far.
Very well written, and very hot! I love how little Henry cares about putting on a show for Jack. Some of the big "firsts" - including the biggest - Jack has no idea it's happening, even though it's happening right in front of him.
Looking forward to part 2.