All Comments on 'Meeting the Undertaker'

Ok, so I can't fault the subject matter, I mean the Undertaker is hot, but this story is in severe need of an editor. You jump back and forth between first and third person viewpoint, and I think I even saw second person used once. Spelling and Grammar errors abound, and it's also really really too short.

This is a super hot story idea (except Chyna being ugly and nasty, but I won't hold your taste in women against you) but the inherent hotness is held back by these errors. You are doing your imagination a diservice by not editing.

I hope to see an edited version out soon :)