All Comments on 'Melanie's Surprise'

by BlackWizard

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 3 years ago

Wow, not even the best editor can save this racist piece of shit.

MainweserMainweserover 3 years ago
Round two

I'm ready for round two. Hope you too

DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

Melanie needs to join her stepmom by the pool so the BBCS can get her airtight. When they are done with her she can go back to her dorm with a black baby in her

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Why the duck would she care if her dad cheated on her step mom?

They weren’t close before the divorce so why would they be close after?

Go fuck your self you piece of shit.

MuchNeededMonsterMuchNeededMonsterover 3 years ago
Round 2

Melanie definitely needs to get fucked. Part 3 can be her getting gang banged. Part 4 sees her and Brandi getting matching Queen of a Spades tattoos

JonConningtonJonConningtonabout 2 years ago

Hope more chapeters are coming. This story is really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Grammer is atrocious.

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26/11/23 Hello Readers! I just posted Mass Erect chapter 6 here and on another site. I hope you enjoy it. Please comment on what you think. Sincerely BW