All Comments on 'Melissa'

This.sucked

Anyone dumb enough to say something stupid like "this sucked" and not specify a reason they didn't like it needs to grow a brain that works. No wonder you hid behind a cloak of anonymity. How is the author supposed to improve their writing if you don't say what it is you disliked about the story?

Personally, I thought it was well-written. I give it a 4. I would have given it a 5 if it were longer.

To "Be Constructive" guy/gal: Thanks for the advice. I've been called out before for having too much background, so i guess i need to find a happy medium. And I agree with you that the first person is probably a troll.

I would like to see another chapter. I think you could have put more in to this one, but you seem to be testing the waters of femdom fiction.

I could do that. It'll take a few days to be written and posted...

Nice direct story.