All Comments on 'Melissa My Lover'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
rush

I really enjoyed this story but seems you rushed it a little to much. Didn't have time to enjoy each thing they were doing. Maybe get more detailed or make it more than one story?

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