All Comments on 'Melissa's Life Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please keep this story going

its awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please keep going!

This story is great, please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good story

Another good chapter. She’s learning to accept her place in life and should just let her Dad do what he wants with her. Why should he pay for hookers when he’s got her to use? I hope he invites plenty of his friends around to show her that she’s nothing but a slut, and I hope Tim finds out too. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good

Truthfully I'm really not into incest at all!!!! But you've got me hooked with this one!!! keep it up.

baby_girl13baby_girl13almost 12 years ago
Sexy

I love reading this story, I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Tongue not tong otherwise not terrible

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Ok yes the father needs rehab and therapy. Yes the author did a good job capturing victim guilt and self blame.

... but she's be totally justified cutting his dick if as he is in post partying stupor and shoving it up his ass. Then cutting his sack off and cramming them in his mouth. If he survives he'll be ready for the rehab and therapy.

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