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yowseryowserover 5 years ago
Breezy read

Sweet story, nice movement.

" the tank's thin fabric kept the analytical faculties of his brain disabled. "

I have heard of this issue.

Keep writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More Please

I like the characters. I like the story.

Eager for further development of both.

PennameWombatPennameWombatover 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is up

Author here. Part 2 continues the adventures of Mel and Chris and is up at 'Mel's Phone Call Pt. 02' in this same category. I hope you enjoy it.

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...

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