by PennameWombat
Author here. Part 2 continues the adventures of Mel and Chris and is up at 'Mel's Phone Call Pt. 02' in this same category. I hope you enjoy it.
I like the characters. I like the story.
Eager for further development of both.
Sweet story, nice movement.
" the tank's thin fabric kept the analytical faculties of his brain disabled. "
I have heard of this issue.
Keep writing...