All Comments on 'Mel's Repressed Desires Ch. 01'

Tags worked 1 star for gay shit

From housewife to slut in one small paragraph. Nope. Go back to writing gay stories.

I didn't understand what you want with this gay crap at LW?

Gay male. UGH!

1) You'[re obviously proud of being mentally ill

2) Writing is NOT in your wheelhouse

3) This sucked worse than the blow job you will give to some wanker someday

4) You'd be better served spending time at the local gay bar and meet the man of your dreams

5)Feel free to never ever attempt to spew your literary equivalent of necrotizing fasciitis here again in the future. Yes your "writing" IS that fucking bad

I’m sure matte will and 26thNC were both jerking off pretty hard when you got to the part about the guy sucking the other guy off. Of course, it may have been hard for them to read this while they sucked each other off.

Quite difficult to read due to poor sentence structure and grammar. Might be a good story, but it needs strong editing.

Those that protest the male/male contact are really trying to hide their own repressed gay tendencies. A man secure in his own sexuality wouldn't even bother to comment.

Generally I'm not so upset by any sexual proclivity but this is just horribly written and that's more of a crime than the actual story itself.

Sees to be more gay than LW, and cuckold too.

Very sexy and delicious. Love hearing both perspectives.