All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 04'

Story is progressing nicely. Good mix of some hot sex and an actual plot.

I've actually seen a lightning bolt hit the top of a skyscraper a few times. This was a really good spot to use that imagery.

Also, good to see the characters acting "true to character", even after the drug-induced sex.

This makes me think of a porno "Little Shop of Horrors". Can I option "MELVIN! The Musical"?

Can't wait to read the next installment!