All Comments on 'Memoir of a Midnight Bloom'

I hope to read more stories with this kind of a first-person narrative. Very good.

Would prefer if the guy was less of a wimp, but I understand that flaws make a character more relatable. Thank you for sharing!

-hgarland

Thanks for the comment! I'm rather surprised to get one. This is the first time I've written a story from 1st person perspective, so I'm glad it satisfied. I've actually submitted an edit for this story that might make James's character a bit more solid (but still timid), fixes some grammar, etc. So when that's up--whenever that will be-- I hope you will revisit.