All Comments on 'Memoirs of a Shared Wife Ch. 37'

by Pippa76

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 1 year ago

I wonder if Sammy and the old man in Number 8 are friends, or hate each other? I realize you were flustered, but it would have shown quite a bit of moxie if you had replied, "Oh, you think you do, do you?" or something, or maybe flashed him your boobs. You did, of course, both the normal and the submissive thing. Will you revisit Sammy? He doesn't seem as compelling a figure as Dave, or even Alan. Maybe he'll become a more fleshed-out (so speak) character as you get to know him; after all, he's had a long life. It would be a boring, long life; I'm sure that's the norm, after all, but maybe during those 86 years some truly interesting things transpired that he could tell you about. I'll await your further chapters to find out! Five stars, you sexy woman.~~JB

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

I love your stories

MetalRabbit51MetalRabbit51over 1 year ago

So much to love here! The delightful contrast of dark and light skin. A dominant man igniting the passion of a submissive woman. Lingerie. Hot, passionate sex. Lingerie. Intrigue, as in what did Dave tell Sammy, as well as the creepy sort down the hall. And now, what to say to hubby? Well crafted, sexy tale!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 1 year ago

If you are half the author I think you are, you won’t use the ridiculous trope of a submissive husband surrendering his wife to another man and being thrilled to being allowed to jerk off.

I’m sick to death of stories that treat the husbands as cardboard cutouts and their marriage as a place to wipe dogshit on. Give us some actual pathos: anger, hurt, betrayal, even sadness.

Even if John loves his wife so much that he would be willing to overlook her actions, there HAS to be a breaking point. A moment when he realizes that he’s been friendzoned or worse: treated with apathy.

charliem100charliem100over 1 year ago

Very good chapter and I'm hoping the next visit will have her starting with room #10 and then visiting room #8.

Whackdoodle, it sounds as if you haven't read any of the previous chapters.

Gazza6969Gazza6969about 1 year ago

What you going to tell John, PiP ?

That the old man had a bigger cock

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Perfect Masterpiece.

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