All Comments on 'Memories of Our First Couple Swap'

The story had merit, but the manner presented made it all description and little passion. A more straight forward approach to the same story could have been hot. A rewrite with dialog would be nice.

A couple of errors but a good story, if you write a part two, i would like to hear about the girls getting together and the boys sucking each other then you taking it up your arse while being encouraged and wanked off by your wife.