All Comments on 'Memories of the Path'

It seems to have the makings of a good story or...two. I don't get the jump from consummating with boyfriend....to being with a husband, pregnant, in a tribe...

It would probably help if the author mentioned anywhere that this is the third part to two previous stories, but he doesn't, so the audience is just left to wonder what the hell is going on. I say good luck and godspeed, avid readers!

interesting backstory, really fleshing out your characters

I will never understand why someone would care for a whore for black cock who is even pregnant with his bastard child?

But this is only fiction...