All Comments on 'Memory'

Fetish?

Bluurrghh! Don't you hate it when you have to burp and when you do, you throw up a little in your mouth? Yeahhh, that's this story. Sorry, it's a no from me. But because you didn't make him a panties wearing sissy...YET! And you did keep it between the husband and his wife...for now? I will give more than 1☆. Let's hope the wife is a good and decent human being whose only desire is to help heal her husband, not turn him into a worm living under a rock!

Why are you glorifying violence against children? Thankfully this is illegal in civilised countries. Sexualising violence against our children is morally corrupt and abhorrent. Shame on you

I would suggest you put this in Fetish after finding an editor and doing a rewrite.

Author's Note: As one commenter suggested I've submitted an edit to move the story to Fetish.

Seriously flawed story, nothing resembling a LW here.

Is there going to be a part 2? Is this it?