by ForbiddenFantasiesExplored
That's it? You stopped there?! I hope there is another part to be added SOON. I have read it twice and my mind is racing with the possibilities. This is different, yet touches the atmosphere of reality. I want to know more about Kathleen. What the hell is happening to Mike? And yes, the memory purging, "flash lines" are of intrigue. Bravo. Now get to work and get the story moving out of the potential realm and further into the legitimate-worth-reading realm.
Something tells me Mike's gf is in for a surprise. I will check back in as there is something here lurking that could lift this up from a few stars to more.