All Comments on 'Men in My Life Ch. 01'

You sure seem to be that rare bride -

Lots of Attitude & a Sense of Humour.

Tu cheez badi hai mast !!! :-)

Well written ..... I'd love to read more.

What a idiotic story! Only for insider!! Maybe she wants to be a slut and it ends how always in cuckolding!! More that author can not achieve !!

Please create a separate category for all of these Desi/Indian wife stories. They really are a sub genre of their own , and a place just for them would save the scores from these stories being savaged by people who are not accustomed to their unique culture of sexual fantasy.

Well any self respecting milliner knows a hat emblazoned w/ the tag with " one size fits all " is probably less then cutting edge headgear. Conversely a true fan of erotica with a sense of curiosity wouldn't be deterred by author's point of original'. The author threw off sparks copious sparks of humor and talent that transcends culture .

This is a fundamentally fine flash story for readers owning an affinity to multi-spiced broad palette and palate.

I thank MastMadhuri for sharing.

The author threw up sparks and they exploded up his ass. How wonderful, this was actually praised as fine erotica. Again, Wow.

Starting with silly character names and ending with behavior that just made me laugh myself silly. Even for a fictional story this was just ludicrous.

No stars

Rated 5 stars.do not listen to the retards here

You write wonderful erotica and have such a flair for writing

Make her wear low saree below navel,skimpiest of blouses and give her a navel piercing

**** Too short but very amusing.

Too short,not unpleasant, the names may not be familiar but then that happens when you are a frog from a little pond!

You got that right. We won't listen to you. 1* for this "dreck".

Madhuri's got a wild side. We can see that from the get go & throughout the story. Even the title tells us in no uncertain terms that the shy & obedient Indian bride is not gonna be a one-man woman.

This chapter is just an INTRO!

A Big Hi to all of you!

I want to thank you for not only reading but critiquing my story. This is my first time writing erotica, so please bear with me. I have written fiction before, but have always shied away from eroticism. I have tried to experiment with what I believe is a talent in me to write erotica. Thank you for your encouragement. I have already submitted the second chapter and it is way longer than this intro. I am so happy with the amount of view and feedback that I am receiving. Please, keep doing that. Helps me with being a better write of erotica. I promise I will only get better.

Thank you again!

I loved the beginning, please continue and write tons more! :)