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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The writing is great. But you desperately need a proofreader other than spellcheck. In Ch. 2 one of the girls has a scrotum - and I don't think that is the word you meant.

AndroneseBisAndroneseBisabout 2 years agoAuthor

On the theme of proof reading I totally agree. At the beginning I tried to contact the people that volunteered to be editors, never got an answer so I gave up.

If anybody is interested by the challenge... please contact me.

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