by That_Guy71
Your story was a bit long, but I was enjoying it until Carmen cheated on John, and really for no good reason. Well, that's not quite true, I felt the story was taking the manipulation of John and emotional damage a little too far, but I was still along for the ride. Sadly however, about the minute she drove off, deliberately ditching her husband to cheat on him behind his back, I stopped reading. Normally, I tend to not rate stories that are just topics I am not interested in, but frankly I'm a little pissed off I spent this much time reading a story that was advertised as a cuckold story, only to find out it's a straight up cheating wife. The writing is still better than average though, so two stars.
Now that was some 5* sex. But there is an obvious emotional connection here. That can’t be good for the future of the marriage.
I was hoping for a good old cuck and bull jack off story but was disappointed to get a sterile account of a woman abandoning her husband for a weekend assignation with her lover without the husband even knowing what was going on. The author tried far too hard to intellectualise a subject which doesn't need this treatment and the story became lost in that. Bang average 3 stars