All Comments on 'Meredith's C Plus'

She may be 18, but compared to your 28, she's a child. Instead of being a great role model for this childish teenager, you're behaving like a pedophilic sex offender. Someday a man will catch you and beat the living shit out of you. I hope it can be me. She may also someday tell an adult (which you're not) like a parent, teacher, cop, etc, and you'll wind up in jail for assault.

Give the youngster a break "Mr Anonymous" in the USA! Most young writers have more life experience, than to open their delicate phsyches to such abusive comments on a submission. However; Top marks for his wild imagination,albeit unlikely to happen in this life, unless his girlfriend was a genuine slut. I regarded his efforts more charitably! As experience dictates his future works, readers may be in the midst of a budding George Orwell or a Mark Twain type genius. All new writers should be encouraged to improve their efforts, by genuine readers!

try writing about something you know about, what ever that might be.

Erotic story but usually After first year college chemisty you have qual and quan analysis and then maybe organiiic in 2nd year or 3rd year of college so the woman shoud be more like 19 going on 20

To the anonymous author of "Realistically you're a sex offender": If you'd bothered to read my profile, you would see from my age that this must be a work of fiction. Even if it were not, your comment would still be moronic, since this is obviously a story of CONSENSUAL power-exchange between two ADULTS. The word pedophile refers to someone who is attracted to prepubescents, which an 18 year old college student clearly is not.

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To Barbara: Thanks for your words of encouragement, though I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the story more.

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To the anonymous author of "not bad": I'm glad you liked the story, and I appreciate your attention to detail. I am similarly distracted by small mistakes that detract from realism of stories that I read. But in this case, I based Meredith on a real individual whose birthday is in January, and started college when she was 17. She is pre-med, so she took Organic Chemistry in the fall of her sophomore year, i.e. when she was 18.

why not avoid controversy and up the ages of your girls? Though I found no cause for concern here, and believe me I would have let you know if I had.

THIS TURNED ME ON SO MUCH!

I liked the story. I have a sub that I treat just like that, BECAUSE SHE LOVES IT WHEN I DO! So forget the nay sayers and closed minded and keep writing. I cant wait to have my subbie read it and get turned on as she imagines it was her. And when I was 32 I had my 18 year old girlfriend and no one called me a sex offender. Her parents barely blinked, so write it how you want to. :-)

This is a lovely and well written story that beautifully illustrates itself in the mind.

You've a way with words and imagery that leaves just enough to the imagination to draw the reader in.

Very nice writing here, thank you.

This was a great story and all but NEGATIVE REINFORCMENT IS NOT THE SAME AS PUNISHMENT. Punishinment is what your main character did. Negative reinforcement is doing something good to prevent undesired behaviour from occurring again. Kind of ruined it for me.

Glad you stopped writing!

I wish I’d had a substantially older boyfriend like that when I was 18.