by True North
i enjoyed this Christmas story, clearly written and building to a suitable climax for both charlie and lucy.
Nice story... so glad to know Charlie Brown doesn't always lose out! : )
I wish you had written patty into the sex. That would have made one hot charlie brown story!!!
Well-written sex, light characterization, good atmosphere. Real Canadian, not synthetic.
Loved the way the narrative built up the tension here. I so wanted poor Charlie to get some for Christmas, and when he did, it was great. (Oops dos that qualify as a spoiler?) A great read, and great fun. Don't just keep this one for Christmas.