All Comments on 'Merry Christmas, Charlie Brown'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story,

i enjoyed this Christmas story, clearly written and building to a suitable climax for both charlie and lucy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

well written and not boring

SensualSuzanSensualSuzanover 13 years ago

Nice story... so glad to know Charlie Brown doesn't always lose out! : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I wish..

I wish you had written patty into the sex. That would have made one hot charlie brown story!!!

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Good story

Well-written sex, light characterization, good atmosphere. Real Canadian, not synthetic.

Rain_LoverRain_Loveralmost 11 years ago
Great Story

Loved the way the narrative built up the tension here. I so wanted poor Charlie to get some for Christmas, and when he did, it was great. (Oops dos that qualify as a spoiler?) A great read, and great fun. Don't just keep this one for Christmas.

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