All Comments on 'Message in a Bottle'

A beautifully written story. The plot is unclear as the bus driver can drop of the beautiful singer in the middle of summer and then follow her.. The description of her/their walk to the beach and into the water. The bottle with the note is amazingly appropriate to the mysterious scene. Without a warning/clue he's asked to show his family jewels with a family (?) crest. He does and we, the readers, are lost in the inconclusive ending. Even though confusing this was a fun read because of the poetic and alliteration vocabulary. The story is like nothing I've read on this and other sites. I've glanced at the list of your other stories and am amazed at how poorly they are rated. I'm going to read another to is if I can find a problem.

Struggled 2 sentences. What are you talking about?

Is this in another language and google translated to english?