All Comments on 'Metamorphosis'

Communication and everything in the open.

This belonged in Group Sex where it would have gotten better scores.

Welcome to Disney World.

you have to stop with your teenage fantasies allowing to jerk off.

your story is absolutely not believable.

the guy spends 3 pages telling us that his wife is one of the most beautiful women in the world, and that no one knows about her, especially her.

then in a few days, that's it, she discovers that she has a pussy and that the guys want to put their cocks in it. then transformation into a slut.

turn off your computer a little and put your nose to the window.

stop the exaggeration, always wanting more: more beautiful, more beautiful, richer, stronger, 12 "cock, can come 5 times without unwinding, ........ this will make your writings more realistic.

Hope your poor whorewife doesn’t die in a bathtub, from a drug overdose.

To: Anonymous user on 04/09/2021

It’s a story! It’s a fantasy! Step out of your “real” world for just a minute, suspend disbelief and let your imagination loose. If you want realism, read Melville. (Is “Moby Dick” believable?)

Never the less you have an opinion. Others may have a different opinion. That’s exactly as it should be. You see a beautiful woman transformed into a slut. Others see a prudish woman transformed into a butterfly.

Your opinion is valuable whether or not I agree with it. However, I believe the value of an opinion decreases when the writers are unwilling to publicly identify themselves.

1⭐

this should surely have been posted in the category "group sex" and not "loving wives".

1 star.

metamorphosis ?

we could have thought of a nice transformation, but it looks more like a fly than a butterfly.

Pity.

Like Whitney Houston? You want your wife to die in a bathtub from a drug overdose.

not very pretty the metamorphosis.

In addition, your characters are not very believable: as always, the average guy married to a mega super beautiful woman but who nobody has ever noticed.

a very beautiful woman is always noticed especially if she has a very pretty face.

moreover, women are not stupid.

they are conscious of themselves on the physical plane.

and for information, they have a brain between their ears.

Hello wajawhii,

why credible? because it appeals more to the reader and he can better identify with the characters.

90% of the stories feature a bride so beautiful she should be on the cover of Sports Illustred as Kate Upton.

the husband is still a guy: average height, average weight, average cock ......

then finally the meeting with the other man who is big, strong, big cock, ......

Why not write on normal profiles.

a woman with a little weight in her late thirties with a small belly due to pregnancy is also a beautiful wife and a beautiful mother.

Why the search for extra marital pleasure (adultery, exchange ....) is always described with a bull.

Why shouldn't the bull be the husband?

the search for a sexual partner is done by a seduction, an attraction (nice body, bezu smile, beautiful eyes, skinny model style, in flesh Marilyn style, .....) and not with a rule.

I wish you a good continuation, a good inspiration, and a lot of originality in order to stand out from the many stories with similar threads and characters.