All Comments on 'MFF'

Although I do have a few qualms with your lack of punctuation in areas, this is overruled by the quality of the characters and the interesting narration. The pesonality of the character Paul seems honest and realistic, and you do have a certain flair for making the sex seem sexy.

Stylish in its own way, not too badly written and a very arousing read. I don't think you can ask for much more. Well done.

A finely told tale. It was hot. I liked the story line and the way you dwelt with the characters.

had me coming very quickly