All Comments on 'Mia and Uncle Alex'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I like !

Aside from a few grammatical errors, the story had a nice and dirty build up. Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good ...not bad .

Her uncle seems to want it all at the same time , he should take a little each time until she learns to accept his advances.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Next!!!

Can't wait for part 2... Ignore the comments about grammer, this isn't suppose to be a pulitzer prize story...

Excellent lead up..and am looking forward to part two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Paris Very Soon, Please

Ah a virgin in Paree!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
re: Next

About what I would expect from something that doesn't know how to spell grammar.

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69about 15 years ago
Stupid.~~~

This is one stupid story and I gave up after the pool bit.!! Needs to learn to spell and how to work a story to make you want to read more. ENOUGH.!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
disgusting

Yeah I don't have a problem with the grammar or anything...but I thought it was pretty disgusting that this guy was taking advantage of his niece, especially when her parents just died and she's vulnerable....

too creepy to be a turn-on- he's molesting her in her sleep and she's obviously freaked out by it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ITS A STORY

Please will you cut her a bit of slack, this is a story if you don't like them don't read them its as simple as that.

Yet another great story please carry on doing what you are doing and leave the negative comments behind you are good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Don't Listen

Feedback and comments are good when they are used to help an author or share your opinions, not just to bash on someone. Don't listen to the negative comments. I liked the story but I will say that I was disappointed he didn't get to fuck her yet. Hope that's coming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i want more !

I WANT MORE WHAT HAPPENS IN pARIS?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More.

Intensify what he's feeling for her. It's a waste to have him a known player take her viginity.

Hoochymama67Hoochymama67about 4 years ago

I wish there was a lot more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i loved it

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