All Comments on 'Mia and Uncle Alex'

i loved it

I wish there was a lot more!!!

Intensify what he's feeling for her. It's a waste to have him a known player take her viginity.

I WANT MORE WHAT HAPPENS IN pARIS?

Feedback and comments are good when they are used to help an author or share your opinions, not just to bash on someone. Don't listen to the negative comments. I liked the story but I will say that I was disappointed he didn't get to fuck her yet. Hope that's coming soon!

Please will you cut her a bit of slack, this is a story if you don't like them don't read them its as simple as that.

Yet another great story please carry on doing what you are doing and leave the negative comments behind you are good

Yeah I don't have a problem with the grammar or anything...but I thought it was pretty disgusting that this guy was taking advantage of his niece, especially when her parents just died and she's vulnerable....

too creepy to be a turn-on- he's molesting her in her sleep and she's obviously freaked out by it.

This is one stupid story and I gave up after the pool bit.!! Needs to learn to spell and how to work a story to make you want to read more. ENOUGH.!!!!

About what I would expect from something that doesn't know how to spell grammar.

Ah a virgin in Paree!

Can't wait for part 2... Ignore the comments about grammer, this isn't suppose to be a pulitzer prize story...

Excellent lead up..and am looking forward to part two!

Her uncle seems to want it all at the same time , he should take a little each time until she learns to accept his advances.

Aside from a few grammatical errors, the story had a nice and dirty build up. Can't wait for the next installment.