All Comments on 'Michael, My Sweet Whore! Ch. 01'

great idea and well written but two sugestions i might make; 1] flesh out the conversation between diane and laurie...it might be hotter if laurie shows some reluctance at firstalso the easy acceptance of a weeks training seems artificial

2]it was getting too good to cut off. why not have diane cancel her flight and take them both to a hotel where she dominates both

Not much else to say! I loved the idea that inertia and maybe a little fear of them both kept them in a boring and unsatisfying partnership. I liked how they were awakened to the possibilities this change could provide them!

More selfish misandrist tales.