All Comments on 'Michael or Mac Ep. 05'

Isabel = Emma? what happened?

...and I mixed your two stories up, sry

With each post the writing and story has improved immensely, It's turned into a great story. I have read this several times and it almost feels as if two people are writing the story. Thank you and keep up the great read!

I know you’re not from the US, so I’d like to let you know that pople in the Southern US speak with a Southern Drawl, not drool. The term comes from the tendency to elongate words or “draw them out”, not having spit drooling from their mouths. I was able to tell what you meant, but thought you’d like to know the correct term.

I’m enjoying this series and am looking forward to more installments!

Great, can hardly wait for the next chapters.

Can’t wait for the next chapters!

Great story, hope you will continue the story!

Once again amazing. I would suggest that when you write a US based story, you get a US based editor. You have too many British colloquialisms and phrases. Even time references are British, not American.

Hi - I really love your stories but agree that you need an American editor. I am English, living in the USA for the past 20+ years. The only "solicitor" we have over here is working the streets...LOL. In the US it's always an Attorney or Lawyer. Also no one here would call it a "Full English". If you would like me to edit future stories please let me know and we can go off line and I will share my contact info with you.

Just as an FYI A4 is letter. I've never seac been on toast not in a British restaurant. LOL

Love the story.