All Comments on 'Michael's First Time'

Mmmm. Wish my wife would serve me up like that. Nice short story. Hard as a rock reading it!

It’s a prostate! His prostate was rammed while he was prostrate. Jeesh.

OK. It is prostate, but your story was erotic and arousing. It appears to be an awesome way to celebrate first times!

Hot

But I agree with "Know your body". Use of the word prostrate vs prostate and breathe vs breath take away from the story. But a bit of editing can cure that. Otherwise an erotic, arousing tale.

Mmmmmmm......in my wildest dreams this would happen to me!!.....Well, maybe it will!

Beautiful!