All Comments on 'Michael's My Love'

I like it. I'm ok with femdom and I do like it in moderation. I like that you call it a roleplay, so it makes it more clear that this is just a game to them. I hate to tell authors how to write their story, but I do hope that you do not go too extreme and humiliate him too much. I also hope she doesn't suddenly become a sadist or something. There are so many stories which seem to start out with good intentions and spiral into something outlandish.

Love the premise that he needs to let go sometimes. Great start!

Well told.i love it so far and wish to read more

Could I get you to talk to my wife?

Please do not count on the participation, agreement, favoritism of readers to motivate your writing. If you do not HAVE to write, then do not. If you WANT to write, then do.

ps The story was too short, even if there are more chapters. 3500 is the MINIMUM for most stories to build characters, semi-believable fantasy/reality and sex scenes. Longer stories tend to have higher approval rates, more readers.

good luck