All Comments on 'Michelle Ch. 05'

I think the mael/female who decides that someone else needs to show the world and be free should have to strip also. There are many stories about someone who is willing to show someone else, sometimes unwillingly for the exhibitee, the exhibitor sshould show the equilivant at the same time and place.

You really communicate that showing your body and being controlled by someone you trust is exciting to you and this makes your story very arousing and convincing. I would suggest one improvement, that you describe your body (and face) in more detail, in other words, expose your body more to the reader too. Keep up the good work. I would love to read more of your stories. The way that you get teased and aroused is very effective but I would also love to read about you getting satisfied.