All Comments on 'Michelle’s Adventure in Vietnam'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well that escalated quickly. I mean , things happened really fast .

jessbrasiljessbrasilabout 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous,thanks for your comment. Maybe fast yes but I don't think the story was intended as long with slow build

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hi Michelle, I liked your story and how it ended! Is this a true story?

IronWill_IronWill_about 2 years ago

I absolutely loved this story! It's a shame Michelle was on birth control though, I would have loved for her to be Asian bred by a Vietnamese man. Also just a tip for the future, Wei isn't really a typical Vietnamese first name, it's more Chinese. Anyways I loved the story and I hope you write more AMWF-style stories like this!

jessbrasiljessbrasilabout 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous, I am happy you liked the story. No, this is fiction only.

jessbrasiljessbrasilabout 2 years agoAuthor

@IronWill, I am happy you l liked the story. Yes, maybe in the future Michelle will be bred, but she use birth control because I think is more believable. Also, I didn't know Wei is not Vietnamese name, but thanks for the tip :) I will remember to try write more AMWF stories :)

IronWill_IronWill_about 2 years ago

@jessbrasil No problem! I'm happy my advice helped! Also, I would absolutely LOVE it if you actually wrote more AMWF stories. It really is an underrated genre. Just for the record, I LOVE Brazilian girls! I love their nice curves, gorgeous faces, and not to mention BIG ASSES! I especially love those girls on MissBumbum lol. Maybe you could write a story about a Miss Bumbum winner who goes on a vacation to Asia and gets fucked and impregnated by an Asian guy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks Michelle. I liked the story, even if it was fiction. I hope you will write more stories, especially about your adventures!

jessbrasiljessbrasilabout 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous, thanks again, I'm happy you like the story but my name is Jéssica, not Michelle ;)

jessbrasiljessbrasilabout 2 years agoAuthor

@IronWill, Ok, thanks for your suggestion. I was thinking of AMWF story based in Japan but this is an idea still

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sorry Jessica, the Michelle character got my attention! Yes, I liked you this story and the other two you have posted. I hope you will post another story soon!

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Hi guys! I'm Jessica, I'm Brazilian. I like to write short erotic stories (some are based on my own experience, some are not). I'm really excited to be here and I'm super excited to share my stories with you and read yours, too... :)