All Comments on 'Michelle's Husband Has Been Fired'

Blackmail nonconsent at the top end of the scale. I hope this is just the start as you have the beginnings of an excellent adventure.

Tammy?s hips tensing and relaxing with each movement.

in this sentence you should have said 'Tammy's hip's.

you also made a couple of others. signed the anal rententive critic

NO, it should NOT have been "Tammy's hip's". There is no reason for an apostrophe there. The author had it right. If you're going to be an 'anal-retentive' critic, could you at least know what you're talking about?

Ignore those who would correct the spelling, this is a very good story.

Ignore those who would correct the spelling, this is a very good story. Only listen to those who have the moxy to say who they are, whether they liked your story or not.

You lack balls if you post as "Anonymous", what are you afraid of?

That one went a bridge too far for me.