All Comments on 'Midnight Rose Ch. 01'

Hello. I really love this story is so good. Please write more!!!

I really like the story so far and I will definitely keep reading. I like how you describe the atmosphere and Elias struggle, without making him seem weak. My only concern is, that is basically the same as the first chapter of "His sweet boy" by Her11.

Oh? I don't know about that story, I just wrote something that I've been thinking about for a while. If it resembles this story, then it's by chance. I do try to be original, as I'm sure most authors do here. Though I am glad you still enjoyed it, despite the similarities; I will have to read "His sweet boy", if only to avoid such a mistake in the future. Thank you for telling me.

It’s really good but I agree with Anon below, it’s basically “His sweet boy” by Her11, which is one of my favorite stories on here.

I truly enjoyed this first chapter, reading how conflicted Elias was really resonated with me. I can’t wait to read more. Someone has mentioned the similarity between her sweet boy which I have also read but I don’t believe this is “basically the same” don’t be discouraged.

It's borderline similar to Her11 story but your chapter one has much more in it and your main character has been in denial due to his upbringing. Her11 story is bit different in that regard, so I think you don't have to worry much about comparisons.

Thank you, I do appreciate the concern for the similarities. I think my second chapter should be out soon, so hopefully you'll all still be interested in it.

Great start! I also recognized similarities to the story mentioned in the comments, but there were a lot of differences as well. Though I also love the other one, I felt this one was much more intense emotionally and while Elias did eventually (temporarily) submit, you could really feel the keep his walls up. Also, that story was never finished (on this site at least), so I'm certainly looking forward to yours! Please keep adding to it. :-)

very good story please continue

Amazing!!!!! Beautifully written. Excellent job of luring the reader in, with perfect detailing of the mc's feelings and thoughts. Cannot wait for more!!

Oooh, love this so far!! This seems super cute and right up my alley. Are you still planning on continuing this? I’d love to read more!!

are you still continuing this?