by BrookeStories
This was a great story to read. Sure there were maybe a type here and there but otherwise this was a great read and you really pulled off the whole idea of "super heroes" getting it on. I really hope you continue this series.
Terrible finish. I felt like I wasted my time. Adam should have one. Who wants the woman to win in a male power fantasy with mind control elements? No one that’s who
Great great great piece. Well rounded cahracters, depth, believability and enticing carnal descriptions.
Go on!
Fantastic satire! Of who and/or what I am not certain, but I would never read such superhero sci-fi unless it was tongue in cheek and well done at that. Maybe somewhere sometime you can give us a better understanding of what you speak of, is it modern society, the media, politics, etc?