by Glorphix
The humiliation aspect of this story is really what did it for me. The cockiness of Mike was frickin awesome.
I loved the story except for the smack. You can be dominant and impart your will with out smacking or hitting someone...the submission from not being hit is more satisfying and humiliating that being beaten to get someone's attention. Just my thoughts on a great start to a story...just don't like implied violence